^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Thanks yo........this shit wus just on mind i had to let it out.................thanks for apreciatin and thanks for yo feedbacks

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yo playa tis was deep as fuck like tha twist at tha end a bit choppy at a few parts but nice werdplay good imagery sorry u had to go through tat i got abusiv parents as well so i kno ya pain

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67-30-46 combined overall on rb


keep lethal in thy beatin heart/
let thy tactix slip life falls apart/


vote on

^^^^^^^^^^^^^Thanks dawg................UPPUN

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fuck that whack ass shit........ur garbage ruth........1




























nah.....u know i had to get u back for that shit u did......anyways....that was a nice piece right there....even though i have a different view of women right now.....i felt it.................keep em commin playboy.....1

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Blessed wit Skillz

this was cool, it had a good message....threatening, but good.
you left out the part about women being made from Adam's rib. In the words of Archie Bunker "it was a cheaper cut"
anyway, I was diggin the whole four line stanza thing, it looked almost like a poem, but with mad flow.
good spit dude
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^THANKS DAWG....................


UPPUN

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EMHHHHHHHHHHH^^^^^^^^^^^^^^WELL THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK AND SUGGESTION.......lol

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