Uppin

returning the favor...

i liked the whole idea of it...but i didnt get into the verses too much, its seemd like u forced some of it trying to get too many multis...not bad...6/10

Aight thanks man and thanks for returning the favor.

view of the same review .........i liked it how u rhymed words inbetween a sentence

that was ill.....nice topic.........
The was coming to end, seven days long so many sent to heaven |
There was this young one by the name of Evan, picked up an AK 47 ////////wordplay was good.......i never realized evan and 7 rhymed lol..........


good work............the chorus is alrite..........

Thanks again

Last uppin just cause im tired of uppin it.

Next Work: Still Standing.

Very nice homey, I like your stuff..keep spittin

Thanks, working on my next drop as i type this here.

nice drop,sorry for the late reply,sleeping is a big problemup in here,but you dont want no fool replying to t your shit...nice job.good rhymes,shit was simple,couldup the vocab a nothch,but eh,its not nescersary...good story telling...

good drop man,i did like reading it,again apologies for the lateness,i usually reply to ill shit straight away but i been busy...get at me with your future drops.

Aight thanks, yea sleeping is a problem here but its all good thanks for your reply.

Upppin cause everyone is sleeping on this.

i'm not a big fan on storytelling, but this was aiight, liking the concept tho didn't get to bored, normally i do but very DEF overall:apreciating your talent and keep droppin.
return the favour plz

Thanks, Aight I lied on this im going up it a few more times so im not lost in the mainstream cause my next work is on hold for a bit.

Yeah, dawg I was feelin this shit...you kept on topic, every verse mattered, good flow, nice rhyme play.