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Anonymiz Jonez |
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ok wtf he beat me in evetthing when his shit didnt even rhyme his shit was an ass more pathetic than mine u say i need a ghost writer wow phatness and cuisine really rhyme
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IP:
goose and 2 that really rhymes as well.......... i wish i woulda known i didnt have to rhyme when u freestyled
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Anonymiz Jonez won dis shit, had a betta flow and better punches........................................... ...................................
vote=Anonymiz Jonez can yall hit my shit up wit an honest vote like i did yours |
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IP:
yo yo check it heres my new freestyle
i hit u in the face with a bat and ur face started to bleed IT FLOWED IT FLOWED OH SHIT BACK UP OFF ME THAT SHIT WAS FLOWIN is that honestly what freestylin is considered and his punches did not have shit on mine |
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It doesn't matter that my shit doesn't rhyme exactly. If u was to say them as u read them u would find the rhyming syllables. Furthermore i my shit didn't rhyme I would have still beat u based off of my punches hit u directly and how my lines flow together, which neaither was show in ur *cough*bullshit*cough* verse.
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mine was bullshit would u care to explain to me wtf the following lines mean and how they are punches
U attempted to “bite” my flows so I trimmed off all the “phat”ness,/ So how u like that “Lean Cuisine”, is it to ur satisfaction?// Who’s ur ghost writer, Mother Goose/ No wonder why dose off afta line 2// jmoney33, on the net, tryin to be big and bold/ That's all he knows from havin sandman's nuts in a "choke"hold// Here’s a line that’s easy for u to understand/ If words could kill, u’ll would be braindead// i get the last one and maybe the third but could u explain the first 2 |
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Okay, the "phat"ness and "Lean Cuisine" 2-line combination means that u attempted to bite of someone, not exactly me, and it wasn't successful. U r third person who tried to create a punch out of my name. The other two people created punches that worked. The part about me being afraid to know my name was a good opener, but u didn't follow through successfully on ur second line. Therefore making that a punchline.
The second pair of lines basically means that ur verse had a nursery-rhyme feel to it, putting the reader to sleep. There was nothing that made th reader say "DAMN" or "Ahh". Afta ur second line everything went downhill, which makes this a valid punch. |
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oh well in that case u kicked my ass lol .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......
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but heres a thought all of my stuff was punchin the fact ur from detroit and u said no recycling did u not under the rules?
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aight check it, tell ya the truth i wasnt feelin both of yall verses but jonez you had a little more bit punches, but jmoney had betta wordplay but punches count 2 me. so my vote goes to jonez.
jonez check out my battle with kerrdezzy and poll vote for the best verse aight. poll vote- jonez |
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IP:
vote on my shit, anon won here, id vote if i could............................................. ................................................
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Yeah, I did, and I seen that u tried not to, but u could've came a lot harda rippin on my Hometown. When tryin to use punches against where ur opponent is from try using famous facts or people from that area. I like how u were tryin to use Detroit being in the middle of the fuckin country. Also, link hometown punches to currnet events in that particular area, like this season the Detroit Pistons did very good, making it to the conference finals. U should've used either the Red Wings, Tigers, or Lions.
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i meant that they got swept by the nets in the conference finals but now that i realize i had the lions and tigers which i could have used and i used the pistons i feel pretty stupid
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ey jonez dog check out my battle against kerrdezzy and poll vote for the best verse right quick~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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