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06-15-03, 08:25 AM | #16 | |||||||
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K ill give u an honest opinion on your verse, the little multis in each line was a nice touch, vocab u could improvea little and use more wordplay nice subject matter
Eborted Rating- 6/10 keep writing |
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06-15-03, 04:53 PM | #17 | ||||||
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uppin thanx for the feedback
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