OMG GIZ US SOME DAMM FEEDBACK PEOPLE I HAVE GIVEN U ENUFF!

please

It was alright. I didnt like the hook at all, it flowed horrible, sounded sorta like a short talking verse, didnt like it. The verses were aight. You rhymed words that shouldn't have been rhymes like domination and termination - those words dont rhyme, jus because the ation part does. I think it could have been wrote better, just my honest opinion. keep em comin tho, elevate.

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k dawg, yo right about my first couplet i jus realised how much off that is, thankz

dawg i wasnt feeling this at all...i read half of it and stopped


the hook is too long and wordy for anyone to really want to sit down and read

the hook was garbage and pretty much took down the whole goodness of the piece, it had an ill concept, but it wasn't pulled off greatly

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okay ye the hook was long but put that away what u think of the verse u even sed u stoped half way through so how can u tell u prolly jus read half of the verse so read it all !!!!

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The 2 verses m8 :-)

the hook was long but if u digest the words correctly ull find its well written by the man Woosh

yo i thought you guys had a good concept goin but you should've put a bit more effort into it .. the hook wasnt really catchy or nothin and the rhyme scheme was somewhat simple but all in all you guys had a few decent lines ... elevate `1

2pac 'n' nas are shit they can't rap
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2pac 'n' nas are shit they can't rap
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2pac 'n' nas are shit they can't rap
.................................................. ...2pac 'n' nas are shit they can't rap
.................................................. ...2pac 'n' nas are shit they can't rap
.................................................. ... AND BIN LINER SMELLS

clog up any of our threads again, we will merk u and put a dent in that clean battle record!

dunno bout the topic man, beet out of taste, that mutha fucka should be dead, the piece was not bad but in terms of skillz n shit

yeah what affiliate said

fair enuff, but we aint condoneing wot bin laden did we hate him the whole concept was to show thta bush and blair were terrorists to but bin laden cant justify wot he did