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06-24-03, 11:36 AM
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Huh? Who Are You..What Do YOu Mean?? Anywayz...UPPIN!...
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06-25-03, 04:08 AM
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Did Someone Say UP!...
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06-25-03, 04:55 AM
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scheme, structure and cadence were evidently polished and constructed very well,, content was good could have been better if you used different imagery and examples, wordplay was decent and vocab great.. overall it seemed very poetic and something only used for text rhyming, but it was still a 9/10
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