Nice job, I thought this was really good. I can definately see this playing on radios. I think its much better than the original.

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i feel you on dat boredom shit cuz i did a remix to the right thurr song lmao

dis wasnt even dat bad...good shit homie...still doin rap as a hobby or u serious bout it yet?

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i didn't like this too much, got a whack lyricist fuckin up the song, the best part was when j-lo started singin.
The flow was basic and weak,
you need to step up your vocab...
but the mix down was aiight.

Ill flow...good shit...sounds real pro...keep it up

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lets notice the replies mystic...

you the ONLY ONE hatin on it....

GROW UP now....i ATE you a month ago..and you still on my dick...do i need to drop another verse?

WHO is still in the tourney? me or YOU?

this was a POP remix...fuck ima do spit mos def type vocab?

Your a fucking no talent asshole, that NEEDS to respond to all my shit..JUST so people will know who you are....

GO AWAY

to the other cats that responded (good or bad) as long as it was constructive...good looks

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hot ness man.. your flow is dope... feeling the flow.. your voice is good. feels good over the beat.. but as a remix it doesnt cut the mustard.. i mean.. if just to say you were to actual do this for commercial purposes with JLo .. this you wouldnt have come off appealling enough.. i know if it was serious and not boredom you would of layed it out easy...

suggest for coolness.. next time you do this.. actually try and make it commercially appealing ..

second verse was better.. that u did..

this is still safe...

one.. peep my track http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62772

Flow is nice.. and you're right, this is a radio track.