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07-02-03, 03:46 PM
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Shit man , you gots worlds of potential ...... Good Luck !!!
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07-02-03, 03:53 PM
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offer what you can to help me elivate and i will do the same for you
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07-02-03, 04:09 PM
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ok your shit was good,only thing i would say is are all your tracks complex ?,you have good style and good lyrics but as a song it may jus be too complex for peeps to sing along too,jus a thought but try and be a bit less complex and try and spit so if u were listenin u would immediately want to know tha words and sing along,Thats a suggestion but tha shit was tight either way.
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07-02-03, 04:19 PM
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i'll give it a shot
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07-03-03, 03:50 PM
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THNX THOUGH
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07-03-03, 04:00 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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definitly uppin that that was ill i liked the drop keep it comin man check my very first 2 i dropeed everybody an give me some advice
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07-03-03, 04:03 PM
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tight as hell dude, only thing id say is the caps lock, sometimes it works but rarely na mean, in text its hard to pass over emotions n feelings, for instance you could be typin somin simple like... fuck u mutha fucker,,,,, < caps,,, elivates the words n points out the aggression in umm, but as a whole this was tight very tight...... always a pleasure readin ya work n u always bringin somin new respect
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