well... i gotta gyve thys 2 gizmo....
VW's shyt just made absolutely zero sense....
alot of the shyt just was put 2gether 4 the hell of it.....
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seen yo......uppin for mo votes.. theres one person that agrees that this mans drop made no sense......

Mine Verse Made Perfect Sense....lol

If YoU Dont Understand Ddont Vote Aiight....


Also What Didnt Make Sense? Tha First Line? Walls to Bricks Lips Bumpin to Gay Chicks Meaning There Pus'es Lips.. They Bump Pus'es..etc..So...

So.What..Is It?..So I Can Work On Wording My Verses Right.For Yall...



But..It Made Perfect Sense...So Blah To Yall...And If I Lose This Battle..Oh-Well.Yall Dont Know How To Read Verses Clearly.. And Also Gizmo Guz..I Havent Commented On
Your Basic Verse...So Dont Comment On Mines...Unless You Want Me To..

~Also No hate To you Giz~ONE

i read it perfectly....
u just seemed 2 put shyt 2gether 2 make it rhyme.....
then the shyt that dyd make sense was pure elementary....
no hate......
just statyn facts....................

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gizmo had a betta flow but both punches were equally as strong.............VW had a nice set though but multi's were all ova da place

vote=gizmo

Yeah I KNow..Wateva..Yo...

State Ya Facts Its All Good...And Yeah..I Agree With Ya About That Just Rhymen Shit...But Ya Know....

And Elementary...My Verse Only?...Did You InFact Read The Other Cats Verse?


You Know..What R-Dot..Do This For..Me...Break The Verses Down...And Vote Like This Ok...:: I Just Want To See What You Where Seeing And Who Won..In Those Categories...::

Flow/Structure :
Punches :
Personals :
Mulites :
Metas :
Word Play :
Etc..ne other category Add it...

Also Did You Read His Verse AsWell-lol J/k...-Peace..No Hate..R Nething R-Dot..But Do That..Yo..-Peace

Sup you 2.......yeah gizmo won this one big great flow and pretty good punches i still can't vote but i'd give this on to gizmo.....I especially liked this line:

You wanna fuck wit tha mob u lookin at the king pin,
Your dick is stuck to a guys ass as if yous was a siamese twin..

^ seen yo..... still uppin this mothafucka.. i got jealous jew (violent wordz) bitchin so im still lookin to win this to shut him up

^^LoL Yo...I Dont Really Care About This No More....If I Lose..You Win..Big Deal...lol...And Trully..I Know Who Won What..But Ya Know..It Just Depends On..Voters Level Of Thinking..

And Also G_Gizmo.Guz Want to Battle Again? Pm me if ya do...

My 4th Uppin...

aight gizmo had better punches cuz i didnt understand wordz wording.......its all explained^^^^ cuz it didnt make as much sense to me as gizmo's did aight later.................................http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65150

G_Gizmo.Guz took it betta punches but props 2 both tho im out holla

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>>>>>>>>>one more vote to k.o. this fool.....uppin !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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i'm gonna go wit v~words his verse was complex and had good structure, and punches

both yall had overall good verses and good vocab

vote=violent~words

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Gizmo had better flow and punches... i wasnt feelin VW's as much.

So fuck this bait, ima renagade, you been afraid , i make you collapse like the world trade
you got popped more than fag poppin x at Gay rave..

^ i really liked thoes last lines too.