umm good thing i cant vote on this one. id say u both loss. thomson im not sure if u had good lyrics or what not because i couldnt hear what u saying. To me u sounded like a fake loon. idunno. And MOC your quality is ummm...... for lack of a better word its "poop". Your lyrics were junkyard worthy. i dont think i heard one multi or metaphor. Anyway if i could vote id say thomson.

tips for both of you:
Double up - A good practice

Confidence - This means mic presence. rap like u got sumtin u want to say and u want all these mofo's to understand / feel it.

Meta's - User more metaphors/similes people like to think.

Overall get more personal and use more wordplay and metas and shit. keep working at it.

PS. Im only being so hard to get u better.. Dont take it personal*

Good thing u couldn't vote cus ur an idiot and can't read!!!How about that for a positive responce. Before you post think to urself who was Thomsonrapper battling M.O.C. or D.O.T.

Hrm not sure what your talking about but ok... dont be so angry cuz your wack ;/.

yo people don't sleep on this
hit it up I want it finished
just tell ur opinion and vote
please
thanx

holla at me

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ay yo don't sleep on dis
we still need votes
I want this shit finished
so hit it up and give ur opinion please
thanx

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haaaaaahahahahahahhhah moc dog my damn i was laughin my balls off when i heard your intro. then that hook came around and the closer HAHAHAHAHA that was some hilarious shit man. you need to turn up the highs i can barely just understand u in this recordin. at least you werent corny in this one like you were in the one against me. i didnt hear any personals.

thomson your voice is so annoyin sometimes. especially on the intro. end of the hook was funny. lol man give him a break english obviously aint his native language. but anyway plenty of personals and punches in here.

vote thomson

^^^ yea cant man up the vocals^^^^

but your punches werent even close on how thomason hit.

and his flow was a little more on point it was pretty close tho.

nice battle

Vote thomasonrapper.1

Vote Thompson Rapper

This was a pretty good battle..............felt TR more.......his delivery was alot better so it was easier to follow his flow and lyrics..........TR's punches were ill except for a few so on that point thats were TR won it

aight still uppin 4 votes don't sleep on this
let's finish this aight?
oh and u can take a look at this
*MoF* vs. M.O.C.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60926
it has to be finished too
thanx

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yo people don't sleep on dis
come on finish it
just post ur explanation and vote none more
hit it up plz
thanx

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