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Old 08-08-03, 05:26 AM   #1
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Word perfect's verse was ok but ya flow was off in a few parts...

Nice line right there....

That line was ok but if you reworded it a lil different it could be better. And I think you mean "dubs" not "doves."

Tha hook was ok and I liked how it ended...


Blunt's verse's flow was almost perfect. Good shit and nice vocab...

That line was good and had some real value to it....
Blunt's last bars had great vocab. I have no fucking idea what you are saying lol but they were fucking nice. Nice piece.....about a 8/10....
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Old 08-08-03, 01:43 PM   #2
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Old 08-08-03, 04:25 PM   #3
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i liked that...the flow was tight...the vocab was good...good use of words...everything really came together in that piece...all an all 9 out'a ten
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Old 08-08-03, 04:54 PM   #4
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Old 08-08-03, 05:50 PM   #5
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what's with gettin' so slept on here.. this is wack... word man, honestly we gotta e-bitch slap these ass cunts wit a back hand ta crack heads open wider than bullet rittled afghans.. lol.. key style... STOP SLEEPING... thanks to all who replied
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Old 08-08-03, 05:58 PM   #6
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I GOT YOU GIVE ME THE WORD
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