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08-15-03, 02:04 AM
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Fag Leave That To The Mods Nice Drop...FLow was nice...I thought your vocab was ight....... Would be great vocab if it was just a freestyle...lol...... Nice Hook....Really feelin this drop homie...Liked it a lot.... Overall 8/10 Just work on your vocab and creativity and wordplay....Should be ight by then |
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08-15-03, 06:55 AM
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aight dawg, this was a good piece,... something more for an audio though.
keep elevating on your vocab though. there were lines where it didn't worked like 'All of a sudden they dont think i'm whack no mo After they munched all my shit, i showed 'em to do'' but anywayz, nice piece, keep elevating and try to take it to audio I'd give the piece 8/10 keep dropping shit like this |
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08-15-03, 12:52 PM
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thaks yall
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08-15-03, 02:38 PM
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keep it coming...this is my best work yet
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08-15-03, 08:12 PM
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please, yall hit me
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08-15-03, 08:14 PM
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Lmao.....Why u gotta up this so many times!!!!!!!!!..........The rules says U can only up ur open mic twice.................
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08-24-03, 03:49 PM
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Jesus Christ Luda, stop begging for Feedback. Its a decent song, but your not gonig to get thirty people telling you so. You should be happy a few people like it, not let the thread die alredy.
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