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Old 08-15-03, 02:04 AM   #1
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Stop FUCKING upping or else this will be closed..........




Fag Leave That To The Mods


Nice Drop...FLow was nice...I thought your vocab was ight.......
Would be great vocab if it was just a freestyle...lol......
Nice Hook....Really feelin this drop homie...Liked it a lot....

Overall 8/10 Just work on your vocab and creativity and wordplay....Should be ight by then
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Old 08-15-03, 06:55 AM   #2
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aight dawg, this was a good piece,... something more for an audio though.
keep elevating on your vocab though.
there were lines where it didn't worked like

'All of a sudden they dont think i'm whack no mo
After they munched all my shit, i showed 'em to do''

but anywayz, nice piece, keep elevating and try to take it to audio
I'd give the piece 8/10
keep dropping shit like this
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Old 08-15-03, 12:52 PM   #3
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thaks yall
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Old 08-15-03, 02:38 PM   #4
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keep it coming...this is my best work yet
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Old 08-15-03, 08:12 PM   #5
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please, yall hit me
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Old 08-15-03, 08:14 PM   #6
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Lmao.....Why u gotta up this so many times!!!!!!!!!..........The rules says U can only up ur open mic twice.................
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Old 08-24-03, 03:49 PM   #7
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Jesus Christ Luda, stop begging for Feedback. Its a decent song, but your not gonig to get thirty people telling you so. You should be happy a few people like it, not let the thread die alredy.
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