I felt the whole thang, when you talking bout something with substance who cares if the flow or lyrics aint the greatest. I would rather read that a hundred times before I read some shit bout cars and jewelry once. Peace.

Complemented each other quite well.

Using raw personal emotions with fairly profound thoughts. Lightly 'salted' with historical references.

But it was that use of raw personal emotions, without them over flowing, that made this piece so appealing. Brought it to a strong level of depiction.

Had a very poetic feel to it too. Especially in flow. Didn't concentrate too much on sticking to a rhyme scene. Which i find can come off quite rigid. Especially in open mics. When not done right.

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i thoguhtu h ad good owrdplay u need text battle see if u can throw punches ya poetry is ill but i can do illerpeies then that
TEXT AN AUDIO prove ya SKILL
AN TOPICALS
good shit tho but damn u hte top poster thats alot of post why do u come onthis site an b not even battle