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gene pool 0 0%
Masta C 5 100.00%
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Old 08-23-03, 06:50 PM   #16
bouncedoggydog
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First of all you guy's both did well, I can see the elevation from your previous battles. So good job to both of you for that!

Gene Pool, I see your working on your verse structure, that 's good thing. I fell your line were streched and too long. It really took away from your flow, and made it dificult for the reader. our atacks were on point but to directional, strtaight forward. You need to incorperate some word play and meta's.

Masta for a simple structure you got your punches across well. Your flow was there but nothing special. I think you could use higher end vocab and better meat's. But for this battle your drop was hotter.

Don't get me wrong, gene pool has some graphic shit, but that style needs elevation, it's too strtagiht forward.


My vote=Masta C

good luck to you both...
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Old 08-23-03, 07:06 PM   #17
Menik
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Thanks for the vote.............upping this for more votes............................................. ...........
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Old 08-23-03, 08:54 PM   #18
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vote-masta c..........he ripped him with my lines....i mean his lines......hahahaha..........P C Z........................madman is a fag..................this site is ass.......100 characters....blah blah........


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