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08-30-03, 08:20 AM | #16 | |||||||
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yo this was deep, this was the kinda poetry you had to use your mind on ya know what I mean? Just some deep shit,... great flows and vocab combined with emotions and a deeper message hidden within.
That's the way it's gotta be. Keep droppin - resp. |
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08-30-03, 03:31 PM | #17 | |||||||
Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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^Thanks a mil man thanks to all for your replies, elevation is key, 1luv.
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08-30-03, 11:11 PM | #18 | ||||||
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Abstract and cryptic.
Letting rip your problems past/present. In a way which brings self satisfaction if nothing else. Because you reveal little in a blatant way with this piece. Yet the way you wrote it brings forth the power. To understand that power, one will have to dig (which'll take a long time). I most definetly appreciate this 'style'. I too most of the time write hiding the personal meanings. Gah!... Anyway, i got parts of it. Mostly probably aren't your own meanings. But what i got out of them. Once again, that's the versatility (albeit to many akward and too complex) of this 'style'. Which you actually write like a lot. Though not as heavily as this (in my opinion). ...resp... |
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08-30-03, 11:31 PM | #19 | ||||||||
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This was a hot poem you started off good and came dope through the whole piece nice job here are the lines i liked the most off ya verse..
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08-31-03, 12:20 AM | #20 | |||||||
Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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^Thanks always V and thanks Ra both replies was on point keep em comin ya'll im lovin the, 1luv.
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