Alot of views but no feedback dawgs,hit me uop i'll return tha favor.

Peace

IT WAS DEEP BUT TO ME IT LACKED WORDPLAY COMPLEXITY AND SKIPPED A TIME LINE LET ME LIVE YOUR WONDER YEARS NOT WATCH EM...LOL
YOU DID GOOOD TO STAY ON TOPIC
DELIVERY WAS THERE JUST NEEDS FINE TUNING

Yo Word as i said it wasn't meant to have wordplay,and i didn't skip a timeline,yo fuck it if you kats want wordplay and complexity u'll get it,a remix is on tha fukin cards jus for all u dudes who were told tha way i wanted it to be,but are adimant you want more complexity,well ur gonna fukin get it,sick of this shit.

Peace

son maybe you need to read the rest of whaty i put there its like a lecture from your pops if he just says it simply it lacks its meaning but if he jokes and explains to a way you can relate then it becomes something you want to hear and understand.stop fucken trippen shit son you want an honest critique then wild out when you got it.it was well composed but on track would be boring

Tha track is done to a slow ass beat and tha intro explains the simplistic way i was gonna do this coz no point complicating tha story any more,when ur tellin a true story why tha fuck would you include wordplay and complexity when it's really tha message thats has to be taken,tha message may get lost if theres complexity an dramatised bars,and yo i aint ur son and yo be brutally honest when u critique ma shit,because theres always d/r and dudes who know as much as my mum,as i said i didn't want complexity,my response if i was unbiased would have been that tha peice was good for what it was period.Ok son.

Peace

AIGHT SON DO YOU I JUST BRAUGHT MY 2 CENTZ IN TO BAD THAT DONT EVEN COVER TAX...LOL

Yo i don't want no bad blood between us,it's jus i stated at tha end of the song it wasn't about wordplay,tha fact is i had a plan to do 2 tracks,one the simplistic way my life has gone^ the track above and another,tha opposite like i made tha wrong choices and my life turned out differently.That track is gonna be pretty complex.So u see there was a plan,but as i said i do respect you so i don't want any beef over a misunderstandin,ok lol.

Peace