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Old 09-01-03, 10:10 PM   #1
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Thanks for all the comments...

Keep em comin....
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Old 09-02-03, 12:39 AM   #2
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Old 09-02-03, 11:56 PM   #3
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second upping...


what?...
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Old 09-03-03, 01:40 PM   #4
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IT WUS OK.....................nothin more nothin less nothin that could make me say WHOA!!!

But .........quit doing Open Mics is not yo style........................lol

Ciao.............................................. .................................................. ...........
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Old 09-03-03, 01:40 PM   #5
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Old 09-05-03, 04:53 PM   #6
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Old 09-05-03, 07:36 PM   #7
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Tight as hell opening bar:
Was it that bad a student?... Cause from day one my game failed me/
A train of lines to advance my chance but a simple glance straight derailed me/

Nice lines:
Feelings grow... but most of all the disappointment in myself/
It's like Chrit's life's a library with all my words still on the shelf/

Foot in the door... But who knows what she could possibly have in store/
But Chrit's mind is made up like Joe "Cause I dont wanna be a playa no more"/
^^ill joe reference

OVERALL: nice as hell, I heard you were tight but this is just amazing, keep up the good work dawg
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Old 09-05-03, 08:15 PM   #8
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good keystyle...nice vocab an emotion...i like the way you did that verse it was tight peace...
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Old 09-10-03, 12:46 PM   #9
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Old 09-10-03, 12:51 PM   #10
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fuckin tight ass song nig... i was feelin that...
ill ass shit man..
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Old 10-24-03, 03:38 PM   #11
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well^^^^ thats great guess what i dont think ud ever settle down with that attude and chrit nice loved it was fellin it all the way
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Old 10-24-03, 03:54 PM   #12
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chrit, u kno this was a good piece because it spoke to people... example is dude ^^^^^. People were able to look beyond the writing aspect and feel what u were sayin. That's the best shit. Nice drop... soon I'll make a return to Open Mic. Me n u will have to hit up the collabo.

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Old 10-24-03, 03:55 PM   #13
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what to say what to say
1st off, good drop kid...
the flaws if any...topic is kinda played..the approach was nice
hook was good, nice and short
both verses had the flow fall off like 1-3 times but nothing bad
overall your good...now quite at my level
wait..."Im better than you"
nevermind

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