this is dope man .. singer came dope .. good job .. first verse up ya voice .. you need to stop moving so much from the mic .. work on ya flow .. an find your voice.. 2nd guy had a good flow an a good delivery ... good lyrics .. singer was definitely dope .. the other guys was ok .. 2nd guy was better than the 1st .. beat was tight ...

good job

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i hate to say it, but the singing is better than the rappin'... lol... your flow voice an' emotion is off whoever the fuck is first... i really wasn't feelin' the verse, the singing is good tho... 2nd verse is better, but still not the best rapping i heard, emotion is still a little off... agian the singing is good, nice flow, really nice voice 4 it.. god i feel like a fag say'n that...it was a a'ight track.. .1

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