^^^ummm...no offense...but 0-1 ain't exactly a good record nah mean man...

^^dont hate because he lost his first match

nah this peice had nice vocab/feelin
i wasnt discouraged by the diff lines
they all flowed well and there is alot
of things that u hit right on the head
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.keepspittin.

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Aesop.

^^^lol...I ain't hatin' cause he lost his 1st match...shit...I lost my 1st 3 when I came back to RB as Prolifik Prophet...and now his recordz 8-5...but shit...he said that he'z retiring from battling like he has some kinda name on the site...but that don't really matter to me... it's the fact that he said that COM only battlez newbz and was dissin' kidz with bad recordz although he himself doezn't have a good one...

i know, are DW, TREACH P, CARSONTJET AND PURPLE HAZE NEWBIES????? I DONT THINK SO, uppin this biatch

tight shit dawgs

aight wot wot.......................................

yeahh... nice.... keep it up

definitly a hot piece both verses were ill, the metas an everything was there an it was nice ta read it an have nothing sound struggled...9/10 peace

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Secluded
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good shit dawg, especially likin ya flo, but it was all good shit

P.S dont i know you from somewhere.......................HA DI FUCKIN HA

ill shit.like wordplay and vocab.keep spittin yo shit dawg.holla


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that was tight rymes it doesnt need any improvements so keep dat shit up.holla