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Old 10-09-03, 08:10 AM   #1
V.A. $lim
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oh shit I forgot to throw these in there can yall check'em out and let me know what ya think

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82941

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83318
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Old 10-10-03, 10:02 AM   #2
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aight so tell me which one of these is considered a multi


your shit is whack so when I hit ya back my punches turn ya eye's black

or

your vocabulary is verry restricted
like your relationship to rhymes is conflicted

^^

Neither of them...

damn...multi's aren't that hard...you will see most rappers seperate their multi's and make them stand out in text by using dashes...

let me go to some of my raps to pull out a multi...

Check this dude, I'm bout to rip-him-in-two/
he bite so much flow he's got a chip-in-his-tooth...
so kick him back to puerto rico on a ship-with-his-crew/
cause I got a million ill lines he's equipped-with-a-few/

The more words/syllables you have in a multi, the stronger it is, and the harder it is to put together...most multi's contain 3 words, but simple ones can contain 2....as you see, in this example, mine contain 4...

for a mutli to exist...each set of 4 words must all rhyme in nearly the exact same manner and order as the previous 4.
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Old 10-10-03, 03:11 PM   #3
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aight I think I got it thanks
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Old 10-13-03, 02:02 PM   #4
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is this a multy

you came for a win but lost so ya shou pack~up~n~leave
cause I got punches so hard I could smack~out~ya~teeth
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Old 10-19-03, 03:05 PM   #5
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yes thas a multie
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Old 10-23-03, 09:22 AM   #6
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i jus wanna give props to postman for realizin that fabolous is a beast and one of the best rappers
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Old 10-24-03, 03:03 PM   #7
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good work on the tips
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