HC man oh man...you need to hire a ghostwriter
and maybe you'll getya first win..you was to elementary..
disses was basic..punches were'nt that good....wordplay was doo
doo..up up ya skillsman...

M-one you coulda flipped ya first bar alil bit betta to make it sound
hot...you was iight tho but up your skills alil also..disses were ok
punches you had about two good ones..overall betta verse

vote M-one

vote on my battles honestly when you see 'em

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Peace............................................. .......worD

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Peace............................................. .......worD

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Quit being lazy
Stop Sleeping

Peace............................................. .......worD

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Quit being lazy
Stop Sleeping

Peace............................................. .......worD

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Quit being lazy
Stop Sleeping
I know people are viewing this battle
so why no votes?
cant one hand type?
keyboard too sticky?

Peace............................................. .......worD

I write with agression, and i fight with expression,
All the hype that i'm stressins, like the nicest of lessons
Like a knife when it's left in, you'll get sliced to perfection
I'm the type to keep it tight, Cause my life is a blessin

FUCK U PEOPLE SERIOUSLY NEED TO VOTE
some lazy ass people just cuz they wont get a
"return the fav" vote

vote for dis i'lll return da favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79344
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goddam this was a weak ass battle. so therefore i ain't votin on this shit.

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was an aight battle
nothing too spectakular
but I htink Miraculous 1 took this battle
his verse was lil more complex, also had a better verse
both need some elevation tho

vote - mirculas one

Vote=~Miraculous~0ne~
Purely on wordplay, punches, flow, aggression and crushing a herb when the best line you got is:
"Hope you ate cherrios for breakfast cuz i think you forseen ya future.....
U already got holes in your stomach so theres no need to shoot ya....."
HC abuser, No hate, but you should seriously elevate before you step to a battle forum again. Just got to vote honestly.
Also, you should only really up a battle if it is getting proper slept on. You can only up your own battle 4 times. so try to pm cats and beg a honest vote off them. We all know what it's like have to wait for a result!
Yo but HC, I really feel strongly that no-one should ever have to read anything like that verse of yours, as soon as one of my battles is over I'm putting a call-out in bitch-slapped pick it up or
w/e, but the rulez are:
1-20 lines
Spit together
Verses due in 30 mins after check-in
U get from now till then to pre-write (and don't even step up if it's not your best)
No biting
No shady votes
Think about it
Ps. I AM A NEWB!!!

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