um... rap louder. rap like a bitch is talkin a bunch of shit and u handlin ya biz. um your style is um... and just keep thinking of more lyrics. dont read off a paper. and just keep thinking of meta's and most of all just keep practicing. it will get better over time.

thnx peeps

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/mcoddmusic.htm

2 new tracks, 10x better than that other shit

3 new tracks, uppin this shit again, hit me up wit some feedback

10x better maybe but still not even nearly up to listenable standard..And get over the Anti-Bush shit for real if you're gonna do it that badly....And Aren't You That Kid From That Wack Rap Legends Board Tha Thought You Were Heaps Ill?!?!?

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i dont know of any wack rap lehends board, i dont barg bout shit, those tracks need to be redone badly, i was jus excited bout my first shit, and why not be anti-bush, hes a fucking screwup fuck worthless dumbass, what r u, pro bush?