oh yeah couled ya vote on this batttle for me its been mad slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4772#post774772

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Mental posted in IR to have that vote taken away... nowhere in the rules does it say "200 to vote" you can't change rules because he voted against you. Vote stays, ima clean up all the freepostin right now. And got dayum... you took foreverrrr to spit.

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the readers digest shit was nice, and the c.s.i thing too, but cameron had harder punches and personals. i didn't like the fruit loops in the start either. you took to long, mental.

vote=cameron

now return the vote, all yall
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79486

ok gonna break this down
Cameron
Forget the facts you've gathered, Mentally Kursed's a typical gay man
He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan

^^Michael Strahan lines are played, you tried putting a creative spin on this, but its still played.

Mentally Kursed must be a "verb" cuz he's on my "to do" list for eliminating herbs
He's checking readers digest to make sure I aint stealing text cuz he's eatin my words

^^First line was nice as hell, but I didn't really like the second line, just wasn't feeling it.


Ya verse'll be far from perfect, even beneath the surface is bland
What the purpose of comin hard in verses if ya idol is megaman?

^^setup was bad, but you made up for that with a nice personal.

I'm like Kazaa and kidde porn, on the computer... I'm nothing to mess with
Fuck a friendship, only way "i'm your "dog" is if you're dsylexic

^^setup was blah but DAYUMMMMMMMM nice punch prob the best in your verse.

To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace
And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets

^^this was kinda stretched, but decent finisher nonetheless.

Overall-decent verse. Some punches hit hard, others were wack, but props to ya. 7.5/10

Mentally Kursed-
Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills//
Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal//


^^horrible opener, had no flow to it whatsoever.

Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest//
Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”//

nice bar, good use of multi's, you combined them well with your punches here, nice.

Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest//
Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists//

^^once again, you lost your flow, punch was bad here, blah.

Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift//
Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift//

^^good use of multi's, but this did not hit very hard.

Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face//
Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case//

^^once again, good multi's, but choppy flow and punch was not hard-hitting.

Overall-I've seen much better from you, this wasn't your day man, punches were off, flow was choppy, the only thing I liked were your multi's, which are of no use if you can't combine them with punches. 4/10

So

Punches-Cameron
Flow-Cameron
Wordplay-Cameron
Structure-Cameron(MK try not splitting your bars.)
Vocab-MK
Multi's-MK
Metas-Cameron.
Opener-Cameron
Finisher-Cameron

VOTE=Cameronj86

My vote goes to Mentally Kursed.I was feeling his flow more
than Cameron's even though ya'll had some good punches.
Cameron had it in complexity and multis though.

GOOD SHIT THOUGH GUYS

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Gone too.
-Amby

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That dyslexic shgit was the hottest thing ive heard in weeks...damn and that wallet shit was hardd EVery catagory to cam no dr good spit

Mentally complained bout ya vote... gone
-Amby

um............ okay........... so most of the votes don't count, well does anyone else wanna vote on this battle

good battle.....

break it...

ight


FLOW....tie
punches...mental
meta's..werent many...so tie
vocab...mental
structure..tie
enjoyabilit..tie
origanalit...tie

overall a good battle....but ...mental pulled it through by a smidge..

NO BEEF....NE WHERE...

GREAT BATTLE...

JUST I THAUGHT MENTAL..CAME..WIT IT...

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Metaphores - cameronj86
Vocabulary - Mentally Kursed
Enjoyment - Mentally Kursed
Punchlines - cameronj86
Wordplay - Mentally Kursed
Creativity - tie
Personals - neither
Structure - cameronj86
Opener - cameronj86
Finisher - Mentally Kursed
Multies - cameronj86
Flow - tie
Overall - cameronj86 (5-4)

Highlights:
cameronj86
-He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan
-To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace

Mentally Kursed
Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case//

ill break this down bar by bar, as fair as possible.

Forget the facts you've gathered, Mentally Kursed's a typical gay man
He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan

ehh ok.. ill give this 6/10

Mentally Kursed must be a "verb" cuz he's on my "to do" list for eliminating herbs
He's checking readers digest to make sure I aint stealing text cuz he's eatin my words

second line was confusing, first was ok, 6/10

Ya verse'll be far from perfect, even beneath the surface is bland
What the purpose of comin hard in verses if ya idol is megaman?

lmao, nice personal 9/10

I'm like Kazaa and kidde porn, on the computer... I'm nothing to mess with
Fuck a friendship, only way "i'm your "dog" is if you're dsylexic

wasnt feelin it, 5/10

To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace
And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets

pretty nice 8/10

overall- a good verse with a few nice punchlines, i was feelin it though...

34/50

Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills//
Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal//

lol... solid punch 7/10

Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest//
Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”//

very good wordplay, not much of a punch but very nice bar, 8/10

Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest//
Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists//

LOL made me laugh, and im not in a good mood so thats hard 2 do right now, 7/10

Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift//
Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift//

pretty good pretty good, 7/10

Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face//
Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case//

whats the FBB? good setup bar and lost me on the second line. 6/10

35/50


damn that was some close shit.. its almost impossible to make a decision, both verses were very tight, and its down to the last point. MK wins by one point. he had a more consistent verse, he only had one or two that stood out, and cam had some good punchlines, but had some confusing bars and lacked consistency.

i broke this down as much as possible.

vote-Mentally Kursed

hit this up honest, no DR BS..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79874

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My vote goes to Mentally Kursed.I was feeling his flow more
than Cameron's even though ya'll had some good punches.
Cameron had it in complexity and multis though.


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I voted so hit this up honestly:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79685
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