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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Steelfist 5 100.00%
IceBerg420 0 0%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 09-16-03, 06:39 PM   #16
Steelfist
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uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. ..........................................
 
Old 09-16-03, 07:00 PM   #17
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Steelfist, you getting a shitload better dog... I was really feeling that, a couple of stretched bars, but everything else was fucking tight. I don't think Iceberg was expecting that, his verse was heavy, but you just tore it to shreds. Nice one, good battle from ya' both.
"when i BUST- A- RHYMES your girls ass im a MAKE IT CLAP
JUST FACE IT BLACK YOUR RAPS ARE MORE REPLULSIVE THAN A 400 POUND MANS NAKED ASS
THESE AINT YOUR BASIC- RAPS..
I ADD A TWIST TO THE CAMERA STANCE, FLOW SHARPER
THAN SLAMMER SHANKS
I'LL LEAVE A KNOT ON YOUR HEAD THAT STRETCHES OUT FARTHER
THAN THEM HAMMER PANTS(LOL)" funniest shit I read in weeks.
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Old 09-16-03, 07:41 PM   #18
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yo good lookin out dunn...uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. ................
 
Old 09-16-03, 09:03 PM   #19
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Metaphores - steelfist (I.B.420 only had 1)
Vocabulary - steelfist (more complex words)
Enjoyment - steelfist (better read)
Punchlines - steelfist (hit harder)
Wordplay - steelfist (I.B.420's was basic)
Creativity - steelfist (his had more thought)
Personals - neither (there was none)
Structure - IceBerg420 (was even)
Opener - steelfist (although 2nd line was stretched)
Finisher - steelfist (2nd from last line was ill)
Multies - steelfist (I.B.420 had none)
Flow - Iceberg (no stretched lines)
Overall - steelfist (9-2)
 
 


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