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I like both verses nice battle i think Com had the harder punchlines but i looked at it as overall whose verse was better and i liked Feeble Minded he had no metas in my opinion but his flow was sicker still
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Both of you dropped sum ill shit but my vote has to go to feeble minded for those hard hitting punch lines 'notice who they picked as a leader? it wasn't you bitch' i think that line about summed it up.

no hate for either side

peep this 'Liba Dee vs Pale Horse'

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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Born To Kill
[B]I think Feeble took the personals and the flow...

Com took the punches, the metas, the wordplay, definately vocab, and the complexity.

Great verses by both...

But Com's wordplay and metas had me rolling.
The high school bully and the lube lines were funny as shit.

And I know it isn't rappin...
But that sig closer and the pic were hilarious.

^^^^fuh sHo, anoTher one of coms Good LINES weRe.....

I Only Sent Two Ghosts At Christmas Just To Confuse-Ya
Christmas Past And Present… Coz Feeble Hasn’t Got A Future

i Give iT to COm foR punches,woRdplay and vocaB, the compLExiTy of the versE wuzz better Than feebles too

LMAO AT COM'S FINISHER!!
::BREAKDOWN::
punches-com
metas-even
wordplay-even
structure-even
creativity-com
complexity-even
vocab-even
multies-feeble
flow-tie

vote=com...thought he came better overall...good battle props to both

i liked both verses but i think com's was better both of you had mad good punchlines ahttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=79550&perpage=15&pagenumber=1nd good flow good battle!!!! hit me back

aight battle.... sorta tha same styles.... in a way.... this how i saw it

punches= com
flow= feeble
multies= com
vocab= feeble
personals= feeble
creativity= com
enjoyment= com

overall= .com

nice battle.... liked both of ur ending lines

Verse by Verse breakdown 3/5 is winner ...

Feeble 1st Bar

im coming to get you, fuck the omens - cuz im through with..
notice who they picked as leader?.. it wasn't you bitch!

(Good personal , not to complex though , pretty simple as an opener , but to the point)

Com 1st bar

I Only Sent Two Ghosts At Christmas Just To Confuse-Ya
Christmas Past And Present… Coz Feeble Hasn’t Got A Future

(I liked this line , funny and a good punch , in one ... foreshadowing the battle perhaps ...we'll see )

BAR 1 vote COM (1-0)

Feebleminded Bar 2
I lost? but as i part the minions in this narc's dominions
all the smart opinions say i beat you from start to finish!

( I would have went for a heavy punch here instead of admitting to a past defeat , basically , you saying , yea you beat me , but people thought I won , well guess what you didn't , why bring it up ?)

Com bar 2
I’ll Abuse-Ya Rip Threw-Ya, This Is War So Stop Ya Feuding
I’m Your Old School Bully You Didn’t Want At The Reunion
( Good wordplay here , nice flow , good followup to opener , funny shit too , bully references are always good , good visual )

bar 2 vote - COM 2-0 overall

Feeble bar 3
i start to win this. . my slate will rip em, i hate his dictum
but this battle means less to me than his latest victim!

( I really dug yur flow on dis one , but thats about it , no real heavy punchs , although it flowed great )

Com Bar3
You’re Losing This Battle With Weak Lines That I’m Soon-To-Dent
I Cause Friction And Heat Like Fucking Ass With No Lubricant

( Funny line , heavy punch )

Bar3 - Tie , Com leads 2-0-1

Feeble Bar 4
traits are liftin - fate is driftin, polls make me grip him
if com's deliverin illness then ima take his shipment!

( once again , your flow is on the money , your shits fun to read , but yu aint saying much of a dish on him , just spraying shit , its cool though )

Coms bar 4
As Soon-As-I-Vent My Anger Your Skill Is Soon-To-Be-Subsided
You’d Think Your Ass Was 50’s Fame The Way Newbies-Wanna-Ride-It
(Nice punch , lines a little stretched , but funny as shit , and a good personal to boot )

BaR 4 - cOM ...........lEADS 3-0-1

fEEbles closer ..........
22 wins & you think ur sumthin i'll sink ya functions
and stop ya flow and illness at the brink of junction

( Aigght shit , but other than good flow and vocab , no punches , no personals ... no dice )

Coms Closer
I Can’t Abide-It, Your Style Is Forged From Other MC’s Spare-Components
Use The Sig I Made Below…..You Might Actually Scare-Opponents

(Cheap tactic with the homemade sig , however Highly effective as I laughed my balls offs )

Great Battle by 2 great Veterans .......... I think Com won it fair and sqaure and gave my reasoning as to why , NO BEEF to either MC , props to both

PeACE crazy E

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damn tough battle..... my breakdown is....

Punches: Feeble
Flow: Com
Vocab: Feeble
Wordplay: Com
Multis: Feeble
Metas: Com
Funny: Com
Enjoyable: TIE
Overall Com

Tight ass battle though i have a LOT of respect for you Feeble hit me up on aim

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