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WELL IM GLAD YOU GUYS SEE IT SO WELL TO BAD THIS IS SLEPT WOARST THEN MOST MY OTHERS
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Yeah this was a good peice, it was a good read as well, you had good wordplay, and your vocab was good, your content was good, flow was good, overall id say it was a good peice, well worth the read, keep dropping.
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do me a favor show love to my 119 track it needs to be read it was hard work to do
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UPPIN
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this was some ill shit god, you always lookin out for me by hittin my posts up so im hittin yours up,i havent done it in a while so im here to critique..tight vocabulary, nice wordplay,tight structure, tight ryhme scheme, nice imagery,good content, all in all i thought this piece was ill,keep droppin tha hotness, and be on tha look out either today or tommorrow for a new piece im postin up in open mic its gonna be tight,havent thought of a title yet but itll be ill.anyway sorry for tha free post,nice drop.~1~
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THNKS POP
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