this was a pretty Good Read...Your Flow was Consistant which was nice....ya Structure Could use some work But it still worked.....Ya Vocab was over Average.......all and all a Good Read Man Keep It Dropin AIight Peace......
Could ya Leace some Feedback on My Open Mic

thats was iight i thought ya stucture was pretty tight

this was an allright flow, but try being a little less predictable
, expand your vocab, but over all it was cool,
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