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10-03-03, 05:07 AM
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Ok well Masta you did a good job of keepin the rhymes tight without too much problem... my only suggestion is that your tense could be watched closer jus to not get sloppy.
realist was ok but i have a note..."Living Only for Vivid Endings" L.O.V.E. right? dude that's an acronym not an abbreviation... ya feel? {Peace}
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10-03-03, 08:01 PM
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hey man thanks for the feedback, keep it coming, its much appreciated,thanks.
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10-03-03, 08:50 PM
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This is the first thing ive kinda like from Masta... not that Ive seen it all... in fact i know i haven't keep it coming
Otherwise I don't have much to say to Realist except that L.O.V.E. is an acronym not an abbreviation.... not tellin just sayin {Peace}
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01-09-04, 12:11 AM
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I say dump the bitch
There's 10 million more that are better BELIEEEEEEEE DAT NIGGA |
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01-09-04, 12:15 AM
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This is old...
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