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I liked the opening line... very clever and nice use of multies...
"Going 'gainst me feels like the year's 1965| Ninety niggas die when nine to sixty five shells hit you by surprise|" ^ very nice... one the rest you kinda lagged the flow a lil... keep that rhyme scheme and this peice would have been great... I like your multies, and your metties were decent... overall this was a good drop... just focus on a rhyme scheme... A.T. |
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