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Old 10-08-03, 02:41 AM   #16
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well... im just sayin... you can guess the ending to like EVERY topical... so whats the point of reading them, i dont have the answer to my own question... thats why im asking
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Old 10-08-03, 02:43 AM   #17
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^This Thread Is Pretty Much Just Putting Down Topical Writers.
All the Hurbs Write About Death, But Dont Know How To Lead
Up To The Action. The More Skilled Writers On The Site Can
Make An Amazing Verse, That You Will Read Over And Over
With The Exact Same Topic Given, So It Is Not Really The
Death Concept, But More Of The Writer Portraying It..
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Old 10-08-03, 02:44 AM   #18
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Why would i put down topical writers when i am one?? im not trying to put down anyone
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Old 10-08-03, 02:47 AM   #19
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*Reads What Deacon Posted, That You Have In Your Sig*

Maybe People Think You Fall Under The New Writer Category?

Hoe.
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Old 10-08-03, 02:56 AM   #20
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Yeah. Deacon has like 200 posts... he cant write... so im not takin what he said to heart... what is ur opinion of me
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Old 10-08-03, 10:03 AM   #21
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^have you seen deacons poetry? hoser

As for the death thing, I think it largely depends on the topic. There are various topics that connect directly with death. If I were to set up a topical battle with a topic like "gunshots" or "dripping blood" obviously, it's gonna be a story about death. Which is why in the league, I try to set up the battle with fairly open topics that can be molded by talented writers.
Death is very easy to write about, but actual emotion and everything else that comprises life is difficult.
Thus, everyone choose death, at least in writing.
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Old 10-08-03, 12:17 PM   #22
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Old 10-08-03, 12:20 PM   #23
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Werd to Maven, its not really the endings and such that are important, its the storytelling, character build up, emotion, depth, imagery, writers voice, word choice, a writer could take `death` at the end of the piece, but still make it dope and fresh, its all about how the flip it at the end and give it their own twists. .
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Old 10-08-03, 04:43 PM   #24
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^^^^thats what im saying
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Old 10-08-03, 05:00 PM   #25
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Old 10-08-03, 05:10 PM   #26
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Old 05-07-05, 12:26 AM   #27
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Because people aren't original..
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Old 05-07-05, 12:28 AM   #28
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pfff....talk about originality

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well, i guess the world will never know what that is
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Old 05-07-05, 12:33 AM   #29
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why does every damn topical have to eand with a death or suicide??? every story song has death at the end... why is this... even when i write my own shit, i sometimes end it with death, but lately i have been tryin to move from that... but im just wondering why...


Not every topical ends in that way...so this post is invalid.

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