ok, nice drop both of you i was feeling it...

Masta C: flow was good, nice use of multies....vocab was good and so was structure, content was good also...the second verse seemed to get a lil repetitive but both where good...keep dropping...

Gene Pool: flow was good also but i lost it in a few spots, vocab was good....structure wasnt bad, content was good...keep dropping

i was really feeling the hook too...that was hot...both of you keep dropping...

and if either one of you get a chance, could you check out this peice i dropped last week....i could use a lil more feedback on it...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85644

hey thanks for the feedback, keep the feedback coming, its much appreciated, thanks.

yo peeps thanx for the feedback I'ma be droppin a new song I wrote myself called "Bloodied Dreams (sleepless nights)" very very shortly so if u'd kindly check it out if ya got the time and leave some feedback then that'd be great. thanx in advance peeps.

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