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very wak battle but legend emcee gets it due to more
harder punches
attempt of effort
flow
structure
vote=legend
pz

werd
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86297

people when you vote on here vote in pool please i need to get this battle closed out so i can move on to other battles thanks............................................ .................................................. ...................

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Ok, Here's tha breakdown:

LEGENDARY

It was a mistake 2 take me on..1,2,3 seconds and ur alredy gone/
This wasnt even a "battle"..I tore you up like american "cattle".../
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Uh.... no

We all see how this is going, your only chance is if i stop flowing../
why dont you just give up now, you winning i simply cant allow../
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Basic, but OK

You know my rhymes r truly sick, and well yours aint worth shit../
What where you thinking?...you skillz r leaking../
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Weak

I dont even have to see your verse, I already know ill take 1st.../
And if i dont.....this battle has ta be KURSED..../
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Probably tha best line in the verse, and it's only so-so (if that)

but i aint even afraid of that bitch,..ta win this all uve got is one _WISH_../
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Finsher should have been much harder


WISH

In this battle im putting you to the test..
Just a lyrical mess...and hes fucking with the best..
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Very basic, overused rhymes

Dreaming if he thinks his rhymes are empiral...
Cause he like a fat fucker always looking for sumthing edible...
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There's the first punch of the battle, decent but not great

Break down this text...leave you to read between the lines...
| Kid thinks hes gangster..cause he has a library book fine |...
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Best punch, definitely funny

I'll spit H two 0hhh...so you can watch me drown your flow...
Couldnt come hard against me so this battles gunna make my win rate grow..
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I like the way you broke down H2O, nice

With his pop-n-fresh punches how could he win this...his shits too soft
My rhymes are eating you alive...so kid consider this your first loss..
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Finisher should have been better



BUT...

overall WISH took this battle, vote = WISH

props to both, keep elevatin

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yeah i think wish took this battle. i was feelin his punches more. his rhyme scheme was also better.

my vote=wish

hit this wit a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8856#post858856

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flow=legendary
punches=wish
creativity=wish
overall=wish

i think wish got this cuz he came more creative with the punches---and legendary was just way too simple----

wish peep my shit out and poll vote!

my vote goes to wish he had a little better vocab man it was a close battle thoguh pretty much tie in every other category nice battle now hit this up everyone http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86810