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10-31-03, 01:20 PM
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Both of these rhymes were nearly jaw-dropping in their illness.
I look forward to eventually facing one of you for the title. Someday. Chrit... Great three parter... Reflecting different feelings, emotions, regret, and outlook on life, lord, dying, and afterwards... The only thing I would have upped is the vocab, some good stuff, but mostly everyday words... Still, the high dollar vocab didn't make or break this rhyme. This was truely bad ass, my man. 9/10 Auspicious (Thug Whyte is it? Too many names you guys have!) Great emotional piece. Didn't find you looking for sympathy at all with it. If anything, ya givin sympathy to the poor bastard's situation by telling his story. Some stories are tragic and sad, so what? Doesn't keep em from being good, though. 9/10 So, how do I vote? I wanna call em both even and leave it at that, but that would be pussy. So... I'm gonna go with "diverse talent" here and vote Chrit. Simply cuz he had those three different viewpoints... That was pretty remarkable to relay different opinions and beliefs and make it work and read so well. Outstanding, Chrit.
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10-31-03, 01:45 PM
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Presently Light...Waits
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Nyce flow by both, both came hard, but rhyme scheme took this, lyke tha different portrayals of people by Chrit, and lyked how Ausp. fragmented his friends lyfe and stook to holding on,
Chrit: Rhyme Scheme: 6, Flow: 7, Story: 8, Total: 21 Ausp: Rhyme Scheme: 7.5, Flow: 6.5, Story: 7.5, Total: 21.5 Vote: Ausp, This was mad close fellaz, no hard feelins, nyce drops, may tha best man win......peep my ish, stay real, peace, 1
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10-31-03, 01:51 PM
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4-3 Correct ? (chrit winning)
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10-31-03, 02:06 PM
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That was two very good verses from both...
Chrit: Good approach and solid. I liked the different points of view..it was absolute money...Good solid rhyme scheme and good flow.8/10 Aus: This verse is ver well done. The story really gripped me...got the edge from Chrit on that aspect. Flow had some trouble spots in the beginning but you overshawoed it by coming strong in the middle and end. Good Verse. 8.5/10 Vote: Aus. Solid battle. This is what you look for in a championship.
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10-31-03, 02:10 PM
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Banned: Permanent
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4-4
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10-31-03, 03:36 PM
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Chrit-nice imagery and creativity...over all a very nice piece...and excellent idea with the 3 points of view...
Auspy-also a nice story going on...nice structure...although ya verse wasn't quite as creative as Chrit's...I was feeling ya flow better...multi'z were good... this was a very close battle but I think I'ma have to give the vote to Auspy... so... vote-Auspicious |
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10-31-03, 03:45 PM
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chrit - ecellent peice, the 3 views caught my eyes and i think it would be very difficult lookin under 3 views when its obvious u can only have 1 view, great depth in all aspects, no much more i can say that other havent
aus- dont care if it was true or not very well written and told, i cant imagine how hard it was writting that about a good friend, very good, the last line in the last corus got me Thought He Had The Answer, But In Reality.. Didn’t Yet Know.. Hanging On To Life Is Nothing.. If Life Lets Go.. i loved that line very hard vote, hard enough to call it a draw, but of 2 ecellent peices with very few erres if any my vote gotes to auspicious vote- auspicious
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10-31-03, 03:50 PM
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Retired.
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6-4
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10-31-03, 04:55 PM
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Eddy.
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IP:
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I win Closed Concrats..votin is useless, damn i wanted to vote..
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10-31-03, 05:10 PM
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IP:
Then vote...
This goes until voting closes correct? |
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10-31-03, 05:20 PM
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Thats The LLL... Good Battle Tho..
Wouldn't Mind A Rematch SUmtime.. How A Championship Match Is S'pose To Be Props To Ya -Gh0st- |
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10-31-03, 06:45 PM
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Straight Savage.
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IP:
It goes until voting closes...
thats why there's a vote deadline...
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10-31-03, 10:30 PM
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Imagine That..
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11-02-03, 11:06 AM
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Really Aus's piece wasn't bad. Just wasn't as deep or skilled as Chrit's. Nor did it catch the reader like Chrit's did. Chrit's three point of views kept you interested and displayed some interesting philosophies and insights at the same time keeping the skill. Auspicious was eh with the flow and umm... with the whole topic. Just a little skill refining and this would've been very close.
vote - chrit
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11-02-03, 11:11 AM
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Banned: Permanent
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IP:
6-5
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