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10-31-03, 02:10 AM
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IP: FF71 F764
word... thanks.... since all this shit has been goin on i have been writing like 100X more... but it aint worth the pain that it has caused me. But you have to take the bad with the good i guess.... oh well... thanks for the feedback
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11-18-03, 03:34 AM
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IP: 1971 6002
up?
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11-18-03, 05:46 AM
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BANNED - Cheating
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IP: 47F4 7493
"the witness pain that ive bled, my love is like an open wound
My soul is missing a string, the melody of my life is out of tune"- this stood out to me. I found this line effective an really paced the overall verse... feelin' ya sorrows, but life goes on... good imagry an effort put into this peice... overall 7 an a half outta 10 |
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