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Old 11-11-03, 09:34 AM   #1
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thanks for all the feedback everybody...it was much appreciated....

anyone else wanna leave some?
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Old 11-11-03, 09:50 AM   #2
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This is the peice that made me wanna collaberate wit you an I did'nt leave feed bk so...

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"star shits on emcees so much that i'll fuck up the plumbing
masturbate on a polygraph to show you the truth is cuming"

1st verse I liked the best coz it contained every thing a sucessful verse needs, flow, structure, multi's, creativity, reflects an the much hard to pull off (to me anyway) ... comedy...

On point... right on point keep droppin an thanx 4 the collabo.
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