LMMFAO at the dre comment.

I enjoyed this alot actualy.. You really 13 and in 8th grade? Just
curious, cuz if you are man, you do have ALOT of time to elevate, and your already well above average.

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^^ Thanx alot man. I appreciate it.

I was hopeing I didn't sound that bad.

Upp'nnn

yo......decent shit playa.....keep it up, continue to elevate
return the feed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92323

this track was aight....nothing to complain about but i think im gonna agree with alcatrakz on the chorus thing but other than that its cool

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I think it is dope myself. But ya noe..It is my track.


Ya'll can check out some of my other songs too.

I suggest...

In Da Club Remix (Nice Topic)
Everybody Round Da World
When I grow up

Them 3 are my nicest...

Thug SupaStar is ok.. But ya noe.

Keep throwing some opinions at me.

Don't Forget Bout "When I Grow Up Tho"

nice beat... you kick in to tha beat nice.. hook is pretty good.. not really catchy.. but good... verse.. i'm likin' this, sick content, an' flow is perfect... i'm likin' this, i'd kick it on my player.. u got some nice songs still, holla on AIM bluntthemc if u down 4 a collab for my boys mixtape..

hit up my track
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92245

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This song was dope...

Good Beat
Nice Delivery
Nice way of putting words together.

10/10

Good luck with your Atlantic Records shit.
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i wudnt say 10/10 nothins perfect..but

this shit was pretty dope...nice beat flow blah blah

feelin it

^^^
Yeah, I meant flow and shit 10/10.

IT IS NICE SHIT!!

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Uppp'nnn this shit for respones....

(This is ShEmY by the way)

i reckon this was a dope track never peeped ur peices before but i was surpised at how good it was..

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Soft focus

Whats the point of living?

The voices in my head Feat. Rule

Unlikely Alias

More Comming soon!

If you do radio shit like this your production need to be way better.Sounds are verry "cheap".The beat that is played over the first intro drumsounds sound like a loop.The guitar line is solid.Dont use that swingtiming on the beat again cuz it reminds me of the Fresh prince.use different kick and snare-replace the string sound with something that sounds more$$
your voice is better than the production..I LIKE THE HOOK.
peace,and check out my shit with the COCOA BRAVAZ & AFURA
http://www.soundclick.com/chewfuphat

but i did download it hehehe
peace

I'm typing while I'm listening to the song..

the boot is smooth..jazzy..I like it..not feeling the hook too much..the flow is good..lmao@ the math line..you sound a lil like Bow Wow..it's cool tho..you should have used a different topic for this beat..only line I didnt like was when you claimed you was a thug..you may be a thug..but I really dont care about..the sling cocaine but addicted to crack was golden..overall..I liked it..fuck the hatas..

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