Yo thanks for the comments...keep 'em comin

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Aiight, First off, the Hook needs some work. I know, for the topic ya'll was spittin bout, it coulda been better. Executive, vocab needs to be upped, but the wordplay was def. on point, as was the flow. LM, dog you had some emotion cuz, fiery shit, you was spittin with a purpose. Sometimes ya flow was off a lil bit, but the emotion and content jus picked up where the flow fell off. Overall tho, this piece was great. Ya'll did ya thing and even tho a line doesn't stand out to me, the piece as a whole was ill.

-Formula.

** Hit up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91167 for me aiight? Yo. . . LM. . . I'm interested in doin a collab with you cuz, PM me if you're interested aiight **

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1940 - 2002

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1940 - 2002

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect