Whole piece was a good read, it all flowed. Deva, shit is straight the way it is, just keep dropping, maybe up the word play a bit. 2-Rich, only gripe is lack of wordplay like Deva, and up the vocab a bit. All in all, the drop was good. Nice topic and ya'll stayed with it, props for that.

-Formula.

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this was a good collab, nice consistent flow, stayed on topic well, only complaint is like other people have said could do with some more wordplay, overall nice red and good collab,

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good post, i liked both flows pretty good vocab, overall good to read keep it up

thanks for the comments....... but whats with the feeposters.......
..........any more?....Pc

thanks fo tha feedback yall we still uppn...............

uppn for some more feedback PLEASE