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Old 11-20-03, 08:19 AM   #1
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I been in EXACLY the same position, last year a girl called Chennel got close to me. An at first it was her who liked me an I payed no mind. I startin' spending time with her though an she was dere when I found out my uncle died an she comforted me. From dat day I expressed feelings for her an she took advantage of my sensitivity by flirting with other boys an talkin' bout how buff this boy is an what not. My love grew to an obession despite the fact we argued ova dis boy she says is buff... she says its me she likes but still semmed to like another 2 boys. I hated her an like you did I wrote a song bout it an put it through her letterbox... I got hell from her, she came to my yard an ripped up the paper in my face an shouted "fuck you" an left... well, I did diss her in dat verse, it takes a while to get over... time is the best healer!!! I still think bout her eventhough I got someone else nowadays... more always come along... its likw waiting fo a bus, you wait ages for one then like 2 or 3 come at the same time... good lookin' on your work, I really liked it coz I can relate, it makes you a mentelly stronger person.
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Old 11-20-03, 08:39 AM   #2
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Yeah I love her so much but she shitted on me so fuck her. We used to be so close when I was battlin depression and shit like that and once I admitted that I liked her she became a bitch. When we went out as mates after she moaned we never see eachother she froze up and ignored me the whole night. It's a true eminem/kim friendship. We argue and make up and so on. You can expect to see some sly disses to her in up and coming open mics. I dont think I'll do another open mic especially dissing her but her name will be mentioned again. Love can be a strange thing. She only wanted to know when I was goin through hard times. I will never trust her again.
Anyway thanks the comment....expect more sly disses
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Old 11-20-03, 09:37 AM   #3
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Yeah, gals don't want you as much when they know they can get you.
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Old 11-20-03, 01:16 PM   #4
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Exactly. I was goin through a rough time and she was there but when I got out of it she dont wanna know. I just use whats gone on in my life as inspiration for my open mics.
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Old 11-21-03, 05:14 AM   #5
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Old 11-21-03, 07:20 AM   #6
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aight homie, nice piece, kinda basic but I felt it
you got your rage out and sorry to hear bout ya gurl
been in that same position as my ex cheated on me and i was too stupid to take her back, ... at the end... all women are whores, lol jk
nice piece anywayz, keep droppin, nice to see ya work in the open mics
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Old 11-21-03, 08:16 AM   #7
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We were OK for a while but it got too much to handle when it turned into an eminem/kim friendship and now we dont speak but I still love her and care for her.
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Old 11-23-03, 08:18 AM   #8
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Old 11-23-03, 08:40 AM   #9
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nice shit, Original subjet keep goin
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Old 11-23-03, 09:20 AM   #10
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I'm feelin dis peice girls be trippin. I got dis girl I used to mess wit callin me talkin bout fuck you David. How she gon leave me and say fuck me? Anyway I related to dis man I hope to see more like dis. Check out my post http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93630 Holla
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Old 11-24-03, 07:21 AM   #11
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Thanks for the comments. up
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Old 11-24-03, 09:00 AM   #12
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Shit man......feelin it, you sounded hurt bruv.....Liked this piece immensely
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Old 11-24-03, 10:16 AM   #13
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I am hurt. Thats why I wrote it
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Old 11-24-03, 10:29 AM   #14
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i thought this was good but could of been better.

it was very heartfelt and that may have been your downfall.

good anyway.

keep up the good stuff

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