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Old 11-21-03, 12:18 PM   #1
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"-Ever We Live, Forever We Die..
Yet Sumtimes Forever Is Endevoured In Lies..
Togetherness Hides If Severed Inside..
So Whenever The Sides Fail To Provide.."

"-Ever Time Stands When The Clock Goes..
We Drop Roles For Those Things That Got Old.."

yo I was definitely feeling the way you started things off in each verse... what am I saying, the whole thing was pretty good.... but I think your strongest points were in the begining of each verse... the flow was also better in around the beginning of the verses... lol... this some pretty poetic shit... has depth to it...

keep dropping man... -1-
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Old 11-21-03, 08:02 PM   #2
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This Was A Collab Wit Me N' My Gurl
1st Verse, Im Talkin Just Bout Love n' Life In General
Then it Gets Personal In The 2nd Verse
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Old 11-24-03, 06:53 PM   #3
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Old 11-26-03, 10:08 PM   #6
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Damn, This Piece Was Dope. Feelin It Poetically. Flow Was Ill And On-Point Throughout. Content Was Great, Lotsa Quotable Lines. Vocab Was Solid Throughout, As Were Multi's. Like Some Other Dudes Said, This Shit Would Make A Helluva Audio. Great Drop Aus.

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Old 11-26-03, 10:49 PM   #7
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good shit i liekd the flow
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Old 11-27-03, 10:45 AM   #8
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Thanks.. Uppin
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Old 11-27-03, 10:54 AM   #9
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^^ Aus. . Can You Peep That For Me Man? Good Lookin Out.

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Old 11-27-03, 07:11 PM   #10
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