UUUUUUPPPPINNN!!!!




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Gotta say, MJ, this was a good battle ~ my first wit' a "femcee", but you gotta good point, that was a decent snap that Veterano missed... We'll have to do this again in a few ~n~ see how that comes out. THIS ain't ova yet tho'! Much L & R too...

PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93272

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Mary~Jane-

- good rhyme in first line but was week
- soft follow up
- good middle

I write love thats why I get it, I write true thats why you sweat it
You prewrite your verse, then when its posted hit edit/

^^^ that was tight

- not bad ending

JDeaZy -

- great intro!
- good follow up and good rhyme scheme
- good middle... strong
- nice ending

its clear who won this battle


JDeaz

Thx fa tha input^^

UPPINNNN.......................................... .............




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Call me tha Surgeonverge
as I cut ya consiousness
wit' tha razor in tha dome
pullin' ya to tha verge
of this abyss ~ fathomless
depth within tha mind

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