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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
.::Narcotics::. 5 71.43%
A.T. 2 28.57%
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Old 11-21-03, 01:22 AM   #16
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^6 aite..coo man u can give a good 2 cents an a vote
but that Dik ryder is a faggat..
no beef at u came hard..but he dont even no wut a mulit is..
hows he gunna say there aint any..wtf..is that

uppin
 
Old 11-21-03, 01:23 AM   #17
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flow = none (sry, i jes cudnt catch yall flows)
structure = none( i think both of u need to cut ur lines shorter)
punches = narcotics
creativity = narcotics
metas = at
wordplay = narcotics

vote = narcotics

was feelin his spit more

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93087
 
Old 11-21-03, 02:01 AM   #18
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RESPONSE

wont poll cuz a.t. said he didnt want a poll but since i am gettin auch a big fuss im here to clear it up

opena::A.T.
closa::A.T.
punches::A.T.
personals::A.T.
multis::TIE (wasnt really feelin eithas)
creativity::A.T.
structure::TIE
flow::EEEEH A.T.

VOTE:: A.T.

maybe one lil tid bit of info will change yo opinion of dicc ridin and dat i dont know what a multi is.....maybe you got that opinion cuz you had yo boy meezy05 send me im'z sayin he was an admin and moderator....and o yea all admin were informe dof this and so was therealist....THE REAL moderator here.....thanku
 
Old 11-21-03, 11:37 AM   #19
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UPPIN...
yall quit bitchin...

.................................................. .....
 
Old 11-21-03, 11:57 AM   #20
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Punches: Nar
Flow: Tie (Both sucked)
Metas: A.T.
Wordplay: Nar
Creativity: Nar
Personals: Tie

Overall: Nar

hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93075
 
Old 11-21-03, 12:14 PM   #21
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This battle was pretty one sided, fa' real.

AT: You had some decent lines,
" "Narcotics" could never be a "dope" mcee, so in other words "Dope" isnt really a "narcotic",
I've been ill with the "lyrical flu" lately , and "explaining this punch" is the only way that "he caught it","

and this line was a good hit:
"But even if his "mother was nature" and his "father was fate" he still couldnt parody "destinys child","

and good close:
"Even if this cat showed up with "multiple aliases"... he still couldnt beat me wit "threes company"..."

Narcotics: You had a dope verse here~

ashy? wut im battlyin a femcee now, stop the votes this is proposturis..
no time to stop this, even if it takes all day i got more patience then doctors.. (<-Tough ass opener)

lets just begin-spittin an statin facts that your in the wrong Weight look at ya health
this cat gets recog-niton by postin, u cudnt be Heavy if u tryed to constipate..ya self (<-hella nice snap-thought the same myself)

fuka blind spit try to match wits when i speak cuz its hopeless..
only time u try to conentrate is starin at O j carton full focused..
u spittin dope shit is like the raiders makin the playoffs..(LMAAAO)

if u think u had a chance at this battle wit that verse your way off.. (<-aight)

r u sure u aint a lite weight,cuz ya punches r sorta mediocore..
u beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker..(<-LMAO)

when u stepin to me u better be ready,if your tryna attempt me..
this battles gettin heated but no need for the sweat band r u really that sweaty?(AVY)(<-again, tight ass snap)

damn white boy wut u think u facin.dont ever try to compaire ill..
cuz ill leave ya in a head ache state of mind after fallin out ya dads computer chair..
yea. my punches knock out Femcees cuz men contain power..
damn kid u new u wuz up aginst skill thats why u posted the due time in a hour..
leave ya flow devoured cuz your comin up killed..
you remind me of my self when i wasnt this Ill
let my rhymes teach ya lessons, so u mite spit tite..
damn still no sighn of this fag r u sure it aint past ya bed time..

Tha rest, I really doesn't need an explanation, fa' sho.
Only a couple lines from AT stuck, but wit' Narcotics' verse? There were no lines wasted.

open:Narcotics
close:Narcotics
punches:Nartotics
creativity:Narcotics
structure:TIE
flow:Narcotics

Like I said, this was a pretty one sided battle...
Vote: Narcotics
 
Old 11-21-03, 12:23 PM   #22
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93049

Ayo- ya'll hit this up wit' a fair vote ~n~ some true input -workin' to el-e-vate!
 
Old 11-21-03, 12:27 PM   #23
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PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93272

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A.T. -

- kinda weak start... too long too
- flow is bad. too many words. needs to be simplified
- swoosh lines are played out...

I've been ill with the "lyrical flu" lately , and "explaining this punch" is the only way that "he caught it",

^^^ not good metaphor at all. sorry man.

- not bad ending.

dude you need a lot of work on your structure. i would like to see you rap that verse to a beat without fukking up!!! lol

Narcotics-

- great opener... more patients then doctors!!! nice
- good disses. structure is great here too... i can actually read this to a beat
- LOL nice swet band diss!!!
- nice computer chair diss
- okay ender...

its clear who won here.
 
Old 11-22-03, 01:20 AM   #24
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uh... I was wearing a visor... not a sweat band lmao...
anyways... thanks for voting...
Still Uppin...
~AshY~
 
Old 11-23-03, 08:04 PM   #25
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^^^ it looks like a sweat band cuz the bills in teh back
dont matter tho..i think i took this one....
good battle kid..
uppin to get it over wit
 
Old 11-23-03, 08:11 PM   #26
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opener: narcotics
closer: AT
flow: narcotics
punches: AT
structure: tie
wordplay: AT
enjoyment: AT

AT just had mad wordplay in there plus everything so that really did it for me, only thing i didnt like was that i felt the lines were kinda stretched so the flow was a little off beat...but u can never really tell in text.. Narcotics also had an ill verse but lacked the line by line by line by line wordplay that AT spit. nice battle.

hit this up both a yall please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93693
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Old 11-23-03, 08:12 PM   #27
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my_vote: AT


haha forgot the most important part....

anyways hit that up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93693
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Old 11-23-03, 08:20 PM   #28
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flow:=...quit stretching
disses:At
punches:narc
vocab:=
complexity:narc

Vote:.....narc


return da honest vote
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0046#post930046
 
Old 11-23-03, 09:07 PM   #29
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how doe JEGo see that AT TOOK THIS read my shit kid
damn.....
uppin for non dik rydin fagats to post a vote
 
Old 11-23-03, 09:10 PM   #30
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ooohhh nice battle ya'll..both came long and hard..ewwww

Breakdown-
punches-nar
flow=both
structure-both
enjoyment-nar
metas-nar
creativity-a.t
personals..lacked hard ones
opener-nar
finisher-hard to choose
vote-nar

did come harder than ashy pz
 
 


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