yo TAG u keep rippin em' and rippin em' he needs to get a clue-and back up off you..........................

intro- both
punches- TAG
metas- kinda both
structure- TAG
personals- TAG
finisher- pine-cone [a lil bit]

VOTE - TAG
Y'all both had a decent verse but tag took this wit his punches by a few inches. I enjoyed both verses. But I felt tag's more yo. Keep it up and stay active y'all.

yo... im not tryin to hate but pine cone i dont know what the hell your spittin about. It makes no sense and your fuckin crackin on the Holocaust. Please hit me up so we can battle. Tag your verse was straight, you got my vote
Vote=Tag

Iight, using your breakdown, weak battle.

intro- Tag
punches-Tag
metas-Tie
structure-Tag
personals-Tie
finisher-Tag
overall-Tag

lmao tag took this without a doubt...pine-cone man I expected more from u...u voted on my battle n acted like u was ill n shit..so that p.o.s that u posted dissapointed me really....ur entire verse was fucking simple..not only that but u went back to like 1920 (when hiphop was really invented ya'll LOL) and just put a damn word at the end of ur line to make it rhyme with the other line...

"leaving you wondering weather to neg//
taking it from a guy named bubba, FAG..."

^ that is the worst 2 lines I have ever seen...first of all..what the fuck does 'neg' mean?? lmao....2nd you fucking threw the word FAG in there just so u'd have something to rhyme....and u even fucked up the flow when u did it....ur whole verse was like that man...u seriously need work...this looks like something I wrote in 6th grade (I'm dead fucking serious too, i'm not exagerating)

Tag you were kinda weak too..but I see what u went against....lmao @ calling him snowcone tho...that's corny as hell but I laughed...and I'm NOT in a good mood right now....so u get points for that..the rest of your verse was really basic tho but let's say u were rapping on a balance (like one of those seesaw looking balances...)

-1= WHAT THE FUCK?
0= just basic
+1= good...

Tag stayed in the 0 area...while pine-cone went into the WHAT THE FUCK?? zone lol....

ok n I'll use his gay voting system too..

intro-tag
punches-tag
metas-tag
structure-pine-cone (atleast his LOOKED pretty)
personals-tag
finisher-tag

blowout battle...

vote=TAG

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94609 drop a vote ill return the fava.......

just came 2 drop this link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93798

uppin (5) .................................................. .................................................. .........

Flow: Tag
Punchs: Tag
Metas: Tag..barely
Structure: Pine
Enjoy: Pine

Vote: Tag

like a gym teacher, i cut ya, sayin sorry sport!

lol..liked that line...pine came weak tho..make your lines longer..Tag's punchs hit slightly harder..he gets this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

hit that up witta vote and poll