Wassup wit tha hate .....

Coz people im battlin got more posts than me ......

whateva

up ................................................

thoguht both culd have come harder..but someoes gotta win...and for me its 7....break down...

punches-7
flow=tie
wordplay=7
structure=chem
vocab=7
creativity=chem
closer=chem
opener=7
vote=7
quite a close battle...but there it is...my vote goes 7....pZ

Could i ask someone to break this down bar by bar and breakdown all tha punches etc then decide on a winner please ......


thought not

2nd Up .................................................. ...............................................

oK to fuck wit this battle i aint swaying votes coz i dont think ima post here as much fuck it dogg u win ......

But b4 i bounce just wanna add my two cents


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y'all watch, as i spit verbal Chemicals from my mouth,
only 17[/B} and bout to be cut down in youth, sent south,
[b]LMAO if that punch is supposed to HIT ME ..... personal side ...... 17 cut down in youth sent south ........... OK

masturbation is something you need to discover, QT with ya self,
masturbation is something you need to discover, QT with ya self,
instead of infesting this site, battlin and damagin ya health,
1st line oK a nice set up but the second line was way weak ..... i was spittin stuff like "masturbation is something you need to discover, QT with ya self,
instead of infesting this site, battlin and damagin ya health," in my 1st spits i ever wrote not a punch didnt hit hard messed up the setup line

rapdictionary.com is were you get most of your wordplay,
my name is 007, but you is gon die another day, or today,
Again the setup line was OK but the second line the "supposed punch" was telling us about himself and then telling me im gonna die another day or today lmao where is all tha wordplay and better punches so far Voters weak punch again

8 lines, all it took for you to meet your demise, i more dies,
??????? weak

inscribe your name, in my ear, so i can hear your cries?
Best line in the whole verse and even that belonged as a setup line .........

Sorry just had to (bitch) but wassup wit these votes ......

Sorry for embarrassing u and the voters

Thank you

^^^
sorry to you all but I'm with Chem... 007's verse sucked........balls......yeah, huge black ones

aiight lets myself breakdown both verses, im on double-0 sevens computer cos i dont have 1 of my own and i can only post at his house. so this dosent count as a vote because i would be banned.

Double-0 seven
y'all watch, as i spit verbal Chemicals from my mouth,
only 17 and bout to be cut down in youth, sent south,
sent south. metaphor for death, but weak wordplay shitty punch

masturbation is something you need to discover, QT with ya self,
instead of infesting this site, battlin and damagin ya health,
again another shitty punch, but you wasnt rhymin sit like that in your first rap, im sorry


rapdictionary.com is were you get most of your wordplay,
my name is 007, but you is gon die another day, or today,
his best punch, but the today bit fucks it all up

8 lines, all it took for you to meet your demise, i more dies,
inscribe your name, in my ear, so i can hear your cries?
he did put the question mark there, weak punch

Chem
Kidz not-nice 'n' thats his Fate - only raps wit-bond who raps eh mate~
Double-O only Spits Raw when his teeth scrape and the condom brakes~
first line is aiight, second line gay jokes arent played

This nigga be chillin in Gay Bars tryna rap practicing mate calls~
Mr 7 nicknamed ''pool table'' cause i heard his holes take 8 Balls~
gay jokes arent used a lot in most raps are they

'Noobs shining but felt 'n' residing in hell im spittin' nouns at vets~
007 Can 'hang sadam hussain on his wall'but still caint mount a threat~
saddam is hardly a threat any more, but nce punch

'Suppose-You' Hope I don't 'Remember-2-Show' 'Cause-Know' I dope~
Double 0 Seven...Your "Fucked-If-I-Drop' Like A 'Prisoners-Soap'~
gay jokes never played, the soap thing is the most played of all

there my two cents

ohky here is my break down

wordplay CHEM
punchs. oo7
diss. oo7
mutlies. even
vocab. pretty crappy no hating but CHEM
played. CHEM
personals. non or not feelign them

CHEM__ U had some nice shit tho funny last line but yah i have heard that before tho but loved taht 8 ball part

007__ Pretty orginal you need to work on voca tho but other then that you had some pretty good disses tho

OVERALL AM VOTING 007

pretty close battle in my view non of them where super wack compare to the others *No matter what chem or haters got to say*

sorry but juding the other persons rap when its agianst you is weak but i wouldnt take it in cosderation but some peeps might

* oh yah and 007 did vote for me but am not d/r actaully explaing a vote here^^^^**



hope to see a bigger battle tho

~peace ~

word play-chem
structure-chem
personals-007
entertain-chem

goes to chem, he was better overall
very close though
entertaining battle guys
vote-chem


battle>8/10

Opener: 007
Closer: Chem
Flow: Chem
Personals: tie
Punches: tie
Win: Chem, but it wasn't impressive

ok pretty much tie battle but 007 got it
flow/tie
puch/tie
person/tie
creativity/tie
structure/tie
opener/tie
closer/tie
meta/tie
multi/tie
overall/007
my vote/007
yo go give me the last vote wit It vs frito i merked him
me vs ape 2
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i think this was a good battles
Flow Tie
Punches 7
Personals Tie
Opener 7
Close Chem
Creativity chem

Overal i think 7 hit harder he had a little more vocab...i think thats what got this battle...props to both...now go drop an honest vote on myn

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Opener-7
Punches-Tie
personal: chem
Flow-tie
Vocab-7
Structure-Tie
played: chem

my vote goes to-seven cuz he was more original
chem you bit a lines and be thankfull
i aint gon expose you, plus you recycled like 2-3 others...so dont expect me to do ya any favors