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well i feel that Tags first bar killed it for me, i hate hearin stupid punches about sex an all that, its old, but he came well after that, but Dox was rollin along smooth and i feel that his was that much more creative, so my vote goes to paradox
plz peep with a HONEST vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9557#post949557

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Suicide Inc.
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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Ayo tag if u dont get in black tie i have a spot open for u in my crew~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Suicide Inc.
RhymeVantage
Def.Ill
Ghost-Writers

Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Relik didn't Poll his vote.........

so it's really 3-2 his lead..........we need real votes...break it down........

multis-neither
metas-both had some whack metaphorageness so i'll say tie..
flow-gotta give this one to paradox
openers-paradox
closer-TAG
personals-para really didn't have any so TAG
wordplay overall- gonna have to go with Paradox on this on
punches-TAG came way harder

the breakdown is a tie but i think that closer finished you off paradox so i give my vote to TAG...gj 2 both.

i have to disagree with a majority on this one...no hate to u tag....but i think Para got u on this one yo....he had more complexity, creativity, and wordplay in his verse....Tag had some ok punches in this...but some weren't as hard hitting as i've seen in the past.....good read from u both though....no hate...just a vote....

peace
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Paradox

I'm serving this cat up, like this a chinese kitchen...
thoughts of you beating me and wearing the tie are purely fiction...

6.5/10 punch, nice play about our crew, good flow

you think your ill, challenging my position, you must be dyslexic...
your whole style is played, i already funkmaster flexed-it... (spun it)

Nice flow, weak punch

your out of your tempeture zone, like polar bears surfing some waves...
your style is broken to fragments like a crushed bag of lays... (fragments = incomplete sentences)

Nice multi here, 7.5/10 punch and again descent flow.

Tag

I flow harder and faster than fuckin "white" water rapids
When they cum outta your boyfriends dick when ya jack it

Ok first line was nice, but second...i dont really like or get tha sexual punches

My skills are too complex for ya, like Keanu actin you dun got it
I own ya bitch ass like a dusty old Par-a-dox in my closet(Pair of Docs)

This was a sick ass punch, fuckin dope flow, i loved this whole bar

You need some comfort cause you bout ta lose this fight
Have the girl from your Avitar strap on the black dildo you like

Okay again with tha sex jokes but this one was better, i'd fuck tha shit out of that bitch in his avy lol. But this was a descent punch.

Now for tha decision.

Punches-Tie
Flow-Paradox
Wordplay-Tie
Meta's-Paradox
Creativity-Tag
Complexity-Tie
Significance-Tag
Tag=30/70
Paradox=35/70
If ya wanna know how i came to this each tie was worth 5 pts. and each time a name came up in a catagory i gave ten points. This was a close battle, and after this, I wouldn't mind havin both of you in our crew. But in my opinion i think paradox won by a hair.
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Fuck, i messed up in tha addition, it comes out to a tie, take my poll vote away, i'm a dumb ass, good battle you two. My bad for fuckin up, dammit i must punish myself like dobby off harry potter by shutting my ears in tha oven again
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Fuck it a reevaluation.


I'm serving this cat up, like this a chinese kitchen...

7/10 multi, 7/10 punch

thoughts of you beating me and wearing the tie are purely fiction...

7.5/10 personal, 6.5/10 punch, 7/10 flow

you think your ill, challenging my position, you must be dyslexic...
your whole style is played, i already funkmaster flexed-it... (spun it)

6/10 multi, 5/10 punch, 8/10 flow

your out of your tempeture zone, like polar bears surfing some waves...

7.5/10 multi, 7/10 punch

your style is broken to fragments like a crushed bag of lays...

6/10 flow, 6/10 multi, 6.5/10 punch



I flow harder and faster than fuckin "white" water rapids

Filler

When they cum outta your boyfriends dick when ya jack it

7/10 flow, 6/10 punch

My skills are too complex for ya, like Keanu actin you dun got it
I own ya bitch ass like a dusty old Par-a-dox in my closet(Pair of Docs)

8/10 multi, 9/10 punch, 9/10 flow, 7.5/10 personal For tha play on his name

You need some comfort cause you bout ta lose this fight

Filler blah nuthin

Have the girl from your Avitar strap on the black dildo you like

7/10 personal, 6.5/10 punch, 7/10 flow

Overall Score

Multi's-Tag=8 Paradox=29.5
Personals-Tag=14.5 Paradox=7.5
Flow-Tag=23 Paradox=21
Punch-Tag=21.5 Paradox=32.5
Overall-Tag=67pts. Paradox=83.5pts.
Okay close battle, both had each other in some parts of tha battle, but paradox got right to tha point no filler, so i'm gonna stick with him, best of luck to both of you.
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