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12-03-03, 12:52 PM
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Woah, that reply sucked. = /
Anyone want to actually give me indepth feedback on this piece ?
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12-03-03, 12:54 PM
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Nice Spit Man ~
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12-03-03, 02:00 PM
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^ Take a look at my post before yours .. = /
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12-03-03, 06:30 PM
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i gotta go with the ppl on this...you show'n some real tallent here.....very nice peice....aight....nuthin more to say really that aint already been said....lol...pZ
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12-03-03, 06:37 PM
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thats was tight man good flow and wordplay.
I liked how it was written keep postin playa really enjoyed. props |
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12-03-03, 07:38 PM
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This didnt have wordplay in it, try actually reading it next time you reply ..
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12-04-03, 10:26 AM
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Man, fuck this .. why do my threads always get the bullshit repliews by fucking morons who dont even bother to read the damn thing?
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12-04-03, 10:58 AM
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Its different, and very descriptive... overall a decent rhyme
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12-04-03, 11:24 AM
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IP:
Ya imagery was spot on through out this you really painting the picture well, sorta felt super human.
Ya vocab was nice and for the most part this flowed well though somerhymes threw me off a bit. Nice to read something original instead of the usual shite that gets posted on here. Return the favour and check my soon to be posted "Drifter". |
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