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12-04-03, 07:29 PM
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Yeah... Mos Def Feelin' This Shit Here...
Even Thugs Need Sum Luv........ Lol......... But Yeah I Liked Complexity & The Way Each Sentence Was Put Together... Keep That Good Shit Up Nucca....... |
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12-04-03, 07:42 PM
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I thought that was really good. You seem to have very good rhyming skills, and the whole thing seemed to flow through like it was supposed to. But do you think you should add another verse to it though?
Last edited by chris_6t9r : 12-04-03 at 07:44 PM. |
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12-05-03, 06:11 AM
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aight, thanx for the feedback, much appreciation, and yea chris..
i decided to make it a ballad about me and my princess...3 verses. 1rst verse- before we met(this one) 2nd verse- when me met and where we went 3rd verse- where we are and where i wanna be thats basically my plan for where im going to take this... so make sure to check out the next two verses. thanx again peACE |
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