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Kautious had a pretty weak verse..and the flow wasn't good at all....but he did have some attempts at multiple rhymes and his actual rhyme scheme wasn't horrible....and his closer was nice...I liked the BET line...that's really the only line that stood out in all ur shit...u got 700+ posts n 33 battles though man u should drop a lot better than that....u need to elevate if u ever wanna get anywhere (as if u can get anywhere online lmao)

Slipt...verse was ok for a newbie...iono if ur new to battles or just new to the site...but either way ur verse wasn't good..ur rhymes were pretty simple and u didn't have any punchlines really....the only good things about ur verse were the flow and the structure...and since ANYBODY can have good structure if they take the time, I'm not giving u points on that...

my vote goes to Kautious...not dickryding my any means..Slipt just didn't win...

vote- Kautious

can someone hit this up?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95795

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I say stucture and closer go to kautious
but everything else go for slipt.

somthin bout slipt's just felt better.

hemmm.... can you ay dick ryder...........

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KAUTIOUS

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flow-sliipt
punches-Kautious
wordplay-Kaut
metas-Kaut
open-kautiious
shut-kautious
vocab-kautious

This battle was arright. Not too bad on both ya parts.

Kautious:

it's natural instincts to -mark- a newb with a -9- but in this case it'll be a -1-/
No real guns seeing how im battling with a fake thug trying tah be one/
^decent opener -better wit' the explanation.

"I bet they call u slip cuz u always just shit ur self thinking to run/
no blames, I out weigh you in this match like M.jackson v.s big pun/
^lmao, nice snap.

so sure, back away from ur screen, im liable to make u fly back in yea seat n rupture yea spleen/
a lyrical fiend to tap pressure in yea cerebrum, your thoughts kid i feel em/
^Structure kind of suffered here

Sad to see that some shit is -ILL-, it's to bad -u can't see- em/
yea eyes is looking at a killa's lyrics to bad you can't be em/
^didn't see a use for this line.

~~~finisher~~~
nigga i'll keep yea body down in the basment like tigers carrer on BET/
You'll get played while i get payed like bujus video u wasting money in the game, jus walk away free........../
^again, structure suffered here, but a pretty decent close...

Slipt, for a newb, you're comin' out pretty well.

Slipt's verse:

//~Lets see the facts, im stacked under k-9 in these rhymes
Kautious so many times, that he stays in the front lines~//
^nice opener -good snap-back

//~Battlin newbs to abuse, but this newb aint here to lose
If I gave you the right desicion, you still would'nt choose~//
^lmao, tight line.

//~I'll fuck you and your whole vendetta,im packin cheddar
Tuck ma 9's in ma And 1 socks cause im ten times betta~//
^haha, anotha good line.

//~I'll have you in cardiac arrest, like anastedic ear muffs
No body feelin ya best, plus i got ya heart in hand-cuffs~//
^decent line -lil' played tho

//~Yea, mike would win,cause pun long gone in his casket
Kautious about his skin, so like mike he just mask it~//
^this was arright, could have been a harder close.

Flow: Slipt
Punches: Tie
Opener: Kautious
Closer: Kautious
Structure: Slipt
Metas: Slipt

Vote: Slipt -just edged it.
I'll post at 100, but that's my input.
HIT MY BATTLEZ HONESTLY FOR ME

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96175
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Punches: Kautious
Flow: Slipt
Creativty: Tie
Vocabulary: Kautious
Enjoyment: Tie

Overall: Kautious

Good shi', dawgz, u made me enjoy it...