Dont tell me how to write topicals..i would own you anyday..ho
i was in a rush..i did what i could w/ the time....

Uppin some votes for deac....you Sek-C bitch

Umm uppin guess.....come on just a couple more votes...blah blah desperation when its allowed....

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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next?
sacred scriptures record (5-0)

Opener - Twizzle
Flow - Deacon
Emotion - Deacon
Rhyme Scheme - both
Metas - Deacon
Vocab - Deacon
Topic - Deacon
Closer - Deacon
overall - Decon

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well deacon got this,even twizzle admits this,but cus this is in elite ill break it down,

deacon - showed some real good imagery, i built up a mental picture from your verse,
really got into it and stayed interested,flow was good,some peeps dont realise
you dont have to have the same length lines to achieve good flow, vocab worked well
overall a dope story, real good piece.

twizzle - felt you went more in to the poetry side, flow was a little hard to catch at first
but it improved later, some good lines, i liked the first 4 lines of the 3rd stanza,
overall good drop, just not as good as deacons


twizzle did well but he didnt grasp the topic as well as deacon, deacon a a nice little twist
with his story,twizzles was more just a straightforward talking about love, didnt real bring anything
new,

vote = deacon

I Polled A Last Vote.
-Axe