Aiight.........

Tek:Shyt was hott flow was nice,punch's were nice,structure was aiight,overall nice verse!...keep it up!

Cut ya bars wit hollow tips and solid clips that cumbust and scar,
i handle 'iron 9's' you just 'stroke' beef cause you aint "up to par"
i stand like statues wit teks, just to 'pose a threat'
rip out your lungs 'wit your own hands'...but winnin?
..dont "hold your breath"
Listen.....bitch i'll smack you till ya "head-rages"
only time explicit produces "numbers" is on the bottom of "web-pages"

^ sum nice shyt!!

Ok Now....

I.E:shyt wasnt bad,nice flow wit it,it was enjoyable,but tek made me laugh more!!....but keep it up!!....nice try.

I'll straight put ya rhyme ta shame.... teks verse neva got off the ground like an iraqi fighter plane\
ya rhyme’s are plain droppin wak quit talkin back .....or else i’ma cream this pussy like monistat\
just stop the act ‘fore I stomp this cat...tek’s like jenny craig rejects you just ain’t droppin fat\
ya not jus wak tek fa real ya bland...and rubbin between ya toes is the only way ta feel ya jam\
ya quick ta ‘dodge’ wit no skill ta ‘ram’ in the end like sex changes gone wrong I’m still the man\
kill ya plan cause all that ya spit is filler....shit I could even feed off your verse then shit it iller\

^ sum nice punch's!!

Vote:tek

reason:he gets my vote by a little!!

my votes goes to tek to me he had a better flow wordplay was good even punches multis were about the same both had vocab

over all vote TEK

Gay Vote.
-Axe

uppn this... an wtf @ End for gettin rid of all my votes???

i shoulda won by now or have at least a few more votes.

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yo uppn mayn... can we get some gotdamm votes plz???


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Stop Upping... If You Up Your Battle Once More After This... You're DQ'ed.
-Axe

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check it i'll hit this up with some vizotes no hate
structure- goes to Tek... you spit stretched lines MC.. its ok though ..
flow- Again Tek cause stretched lines will fuck up your flow...
punches- Tek kid knows what he is doing you had some ok ones... jenny craig one for example but he "Edged" it out since he fuckin likes that word...
personals...Tek his were just funnier and shit... sorry but he clowned on you...
opener-i'll give to MC wasn't feeling that opener Tek..sorry not my style...heh nice verse though..
closer - GOes to TEk
overall- TeK 9 blows this Kat away love..and fuck your vote..

and by MC i of course ment ill explicit my bad with the name ....one love if you read the breakdown you'll know i took the time and fuck it either way.

Cut ya bars wit hollow tips and solid clips that cumbust and scar,
i handle 'iron 9's' you just 'stroke' beef cause you aint "up to par"

Nice opener ^ let's break it down.............................................. .....
Opener=Tek
Closer=Tek
Punches=Tek
Flow=Tie
Personals=Tek
Metas=Both
Overall-Tek

Nice drop peeps. FINALLY a decent non-one-sided battle.

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Werd nuks.. preciate it.


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punches-tek
flow-tie
personals-tek
opener-tek
closer-tek
structure-tie

overall-tek

hit this up witha a honest vote......thanx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98986

Punches: Tek

Metas: Ill (could ya toss a few more, I don't think there were enough in ya verse!)

Format: Tek

Punches: Tek

Wordplay: Tek

Comments:

Ill: That was an 18 line verse ya threw.
Shorten that shit up, it fucks ya flow all to hell.
And it's looked upon as cheap cuz ya really breaking the rules by going that long when ya opponent ain't.

Tek: Lay off the gangsta rap. It's pretty played to death to be talkin bout 9's and shit. Also, kill the quotation marks in ya verse. Herbish.

Peace

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